Chapter 1: [link]
EDIT x2: Thank you to ~wtfudgewaffles
for pointing out some things that I missed, and other elements to improve ^^ I think I've gotten MOST of the kinks out of this :3 If any of you notice anything else that's not quite right, feel free to comment .u.
EDIT: Thank you for the critiques ^^~<3 Added some edits according to the suggestions within it :3
Decided I would try and post the novel I've been working on. I don't know how much I'll end up posting to dA, but any feedback, advice, or even opinions would be very nice ^^ If I work on this long enough, and there is interest, I'll likely post the character reference I'll be working on, and maybe make a cover page :3
If you'd like to know more about the novel:'Innocence is not always White' is a fantasy novel that follows the journey of an odd-eyed she-wolf through the lands of Halzhi after her pack was killed. She comes upon new findings about herself when she meets a strange, aloof male, answering questions she'd had for years, and made her wonder about her lost past, which she gradually rediscovers over the course of her journey, keeping close to Shenha, the wise wolf that raised her in spirit, even after his gruesome death. She knows not why she travels, but yearns to know what she is, and a purpose now that her pack is lost to her.
So far, the novel is PG13 for language and themes, but it will likely go up to PG16 for nudity and sexual themes.
'Innocence is not always White', its characters and terms is the intellectual property of me, =Lisim
. Any and all similarities to other written works, figures living and dead and past events is completely accidental. Any use of any aspects of this novel without my written, explicit permission is a breach of my copyright, and will be dealt with if removal is refused.